Feed Back Questions:
(X= number of times it was commented on)
Did you understand the
narrative?
No- 3 Yes- 7
Did you sympathise with the
main character Emma?
Have you figured out who
kidnapped her?
No- 2 Yes- 8
Overall improvements?
- Reshot councillor scene with an older actor and better location X2
- Speed up/ shorten councillor sequence
- Black transitions are too long/ boring X3
- There are some out of focus shots X2
- The shots are badly framed when emma finds the ring X2
- Speed up/ shorten calendar count down scene X4
- When Emma finds the ring there is a editing mistake of a black screen of a couple seconds
- Editing and sound needs tightening
- The first half doesn't flow very well
- More synergy between scenes - maybe do the warp stabiliser throughout?
- Sound design in pitch scene
- Needs to keep up the pace throughout
- Do you need the councillor scene?
Overall positives?
- The ending is really nice X3
- Clever shots/ good camera work X4
- style of narrative was cool/ advanced
- When Emma was being found, the transitions were good
- warp stabiliser was beautiful
- Very creative
- Good locations
- Editing was great X2
- Sound design was great X3
- The tracking shot was very effective
- Love the editing/ effects X2
- Very good cinematography
- Interesting character/ character development
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