Improvements: Emma - The Third Draft

• First CCTV shot is too short
• Longer transition between George & kitsch scene
• Cut train scene down even more
• switch order or train & ring scene
• Longer black transition between last scene & CCTV scene
• Maybe ADR for George's line in the kitsch scene
• Train noises instead of/ and car noises in ring scene
• Sort Sound out 
• Try and edit it to be under 5 mins
• Muffel George's opening audio
• Cut Jenny's line
• Super close up of Lydia reacting in kitchen scene
• Cut George's line in Kitchen scene too
• Increase volume of dialogue
• Shorten Lydia's look more
• Louder tints when Lydia is looking up
• Increase background music volume