Improvements: Emma - The Fourth Version

• fade shots into each other more
• cut the focus pull shot to end before it refocuses on jenny
• Reshoot calendar shots
• Reshoot a reaction of Lydia for the kitchen scene
• Tweak Audio and add more background noise and sound effects in
• Static over George talking
• Cut shots of Lydia playing with the ring down in length
• Colour correct George's opening
• Add in some train noises to increase flow of the plot
• recolour correct the calendar scene
• stabilise the calendar shots
• Re edit the audio to the calendar scene as it is out of sync
• tighten pacing even more