Improvements: Emma - The Second Draft

• fade slower when she is walking 
• blur George opening part
• aspect ratio??
• ring scene little parts jump cuts to shorten the sequence and cause confusion-
• callender shots cut to be leaner there is unneeded extra frames 
• more obvious that it speeds up during calendar scene
• re record audio in kitchen scene??
• background noise of other people taking and working 
• 180 degree rule is messed up in kitchen scene
• cut jenny's line
• add claps
• speed up Lydia looking
• shorten whole film by cutting unnecessary frames from shots
• its still a little disjointed
• cut down the ring scene its still to long
• George finding emma > kitchen > finds the ring (flashback) > train/ calendar (Intercut with) > shorter councillor scene > CCTV